Friday, May 14, 2010

First Poem

Posted by My Virtual World at 6:44 AM
If Only

If only I have a power
I will make the whole world pretty,
A power that can make all things happy
And colorful that ever be.

This is my first poem. I wrote this when I was in first year high school. My teacher wrote this comment on my notebook, "Good poem for a beginner". This triggered my imagination and boost my desire to write.

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